Noelle

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Hi there, this is stll a draftdraft, it still needs character developement I think you're doing a great job with your ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Sethis giggled, but Aleron couldn’t see his face. When I read that someone giggled, I imagine a little girl laughing to ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! A quick nitpick: Sethis let Aleron wear his lantern; You should probably say 'carry' instead of 'wear'. When I first read ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Something was so different about the fire inside the lantern, except for the color itself, was it the pattern of its ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So this is what you feel like when Akia won't give Falyn answers, huh? Rather frustrating I have to admit, but ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First of all, I'm wondering why this is typed out in italics. Italics are usually saved for dream sequences or for ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Smiling deviously, he turns to me, and says, “Sweet dreams, boy.” I'm not so sure about this sentence. It seems strange ...

Hi there! You see, I have a terrible habit when I'm reading to skip ahead to the end of the chapter without noticing it. It usually doesn't do me well. ...

Hi there! I'm all caught up! Yayyyyyy! So as much as I don't want to admit it, I like Brandon. Not him really, but his personality. And I only like ...

Hi there! No! Nothing was supposed to happen to Rease! D: How dare you. Kylene’s mother pushed past Rease, knocking the small ten year old to the floor. Rease closed ...

Hi there! Oh thank you thank you thank you for this chapter! Not only because it answers some questions, but also because we get to see things from Ben's POV ...

Hi there! Ugh! Everything was going so well! And then Frey just had to say that, didn't he. Now everything is ruined. Guess that's why this is called 'Things Fall ...

Hi there! I'm almost all caught up! Yes! :) Ah. So many of my questions have been answered! Like the part about Kaylene calling 911. I mean, it's still not ...

Hi there! No no no no no. I am not okay with this at all. I have so many, wonderful choice words for Sadie. Unfortunately I cannot say them on ...

Hi there! Oh gosh, oh gosh. No!!! How could Kylene have gotten caught? D: This is terrible! Like I've said before, one thing I'm impressed with is your consistent descriptions. ...