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Re: Territorial -CHAPTER 2 = No pain no game
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! You know, I don't thin I've ever reviewed a chapter of a novel without reading the previous chapters, but here I ...
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Re: Removed
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Great-grandmother said with a voice of steel, This isn't that big of a deal, but Dafyr hasn't ever used the title ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Figment: In the Suns Holy Light [Prologue]
Hi there! He was hearing something like a plane crashing. No, a hundred planes crashing, he was seeing a small crater begin to dent into the ground, as if God ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Secret Service section #6
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I really like how we get to really understand Liam in this chapter. Yes, we've met him before, but now we're ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal Book 2 Chapter 1- The Missing Girl
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Okay, so I totally promised myself that I would read through Book 1 so I could understand what's going on in ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Elementary (Chapter 3: Placement Exams)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I saw this chapter in the Green Room so I figured I'd check it out! Don't worry, I read your first ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 20
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! A quick nitpick for you: And the man I heard this from called it a “spire” Whenever you want to ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 19
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Well then. That was certainly very quick! I'm talking about the action at the end that is. I mean, they're ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 18
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Well, looks like I just had to wait a chapter to see the trolls again ^_^ I always end up ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 17
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! I like this chapter a lot. One of the reasons I like it is because Jay is back in the ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 16
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Quick nitpick: Shep was asking about Marc’s new job as a city guardsman. Marc watched and protected the city whenever there ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 15
Hi there! Oh dear, look how far behind I am >< Time to play catch up! I like that we get to see Jay reflecting on his life at home. ...
Aug 29, 2014 -
Re: Andrew - An Introduction
Hi there! He didn't care what I looked like or the way I talked or how much I weighed Just wanted to point out here that you say Andrew didn't ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: A Certain Set Of Skills (Title Pending), Part Two
Hi there! I'm back again to read more of this great story you're writing. So, I wrote about half of this review and then my webpage crashed and YWS didn't ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: Looks
Hi there! I'm just going to jump right in here. Before light could invade my room , I was up and awake, Being specific is always a good thing when ...
Aug 28, 2014
