Noelle

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested :) The cold had a serpentine quality to it that night. Snakelike. Shifty. These three sentences should really be combined into one. ...

Hi there! *dispells everything from the last Syrin from her mind* Sorry to start off with something negative, but imma do it anyway 'cause I'm mean :P Jk. But really, ...

Hi there! It's Trina!!! xD Rease’s thoughts were in over drive I do believe 'overdrive' is one word ;) A small girl dressed in black pig tails So she has ...

Hi there! I'm not familiar with Homestuck so I am going to review this as if it was not a fanfiction. Not that it would've really been reviewed any different ...

Hi there! I saw this chapter in the Green Room so I figured I'd check it out. I went back and read the first two chapters as well so I ...

Hi there! I've come to save your work from the grip of the Green Room :3 They say you won’t wake up. Ever. I like this opening line. It's very ...

Hi there! Dylan’s hair was messed up, like he had run his hands through it multiple times. Now this could just be me being nitpicky, but why would the first ...

Hi there! What really strikes me in this novel is how you're able to portray Jean's disapproval of Joan's position. Being a girl, I can imagine that you would've had ...

Hi there! I came here to review this chapter and I just got so into it that I had to keep reading on through the rest of your chapters. So ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. "Opportunity, spelt o-p-p-e-r-t-u-n-i-t-y" As I read this, I was under the impression that Rosie was the one to spell this word. So ...

Hi there! Breakaway

Hi there! It's about time I catch up on my reviews, yes? Yes. I blame life running a finger over the backs as if she could feel the vines decorating ...

Hi there! First of all, this poem is great, so hush ;P I totally started writing this review like, two days ago. I don't know why it took me so ...

Hi there! Quick nitpick to start with: My tears obscure my vision The repetition of the word 'my' here is more repetitive than affective. When we're reading, we see that ...

Hi there! As insanity reaches for the knocker And we refuse to answer. This is my favorite part of the poem. I love it! First off, your title is an ...