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Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (13-1)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read the other chapters, but I hope this review will be helpful for you anyway :) Man, I feel ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Slit ch 5
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read any of your other chapters, but I hope this review can still be helpful to you! :) I'm ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Glow- Chapter Three
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read any of your other chapters, but I hope this can still be a helpful review for you :) ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.2
Hi there! Yes!! She opened the letter!! But words written in a letter is not going to heal Should be 'are' instead of 'is'... I think. It's referring to the ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 26
Hi there! So, I didn't review the last chapter because there really wasn't anything else that I could add. You had lots of wonderful reviews that I felt like I'd ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 5- Tyr
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! I just realized that I totally read the prologue and first chapter of this novel and then haven't come back to read ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: d
Hi there! I don't think I mentioned it in my last review, but I absolutely love your title. Looking at it, I'm wondering how it'll come into play. I'm sure ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 29
Hi there! Oooooh, more dreams!! :D only giving her enough light to see her Mary Jane’s. Okay, this might be a really stupid question, but what is a Mary Jane?? ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 28
Hi there! Yes, there was several ways… It should be 'there were'. Ohhhhh, I see some Rease/Cayden action going on here ;) hehe. Anyways... it's really interesting to watch. Obviously, ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 14 Part 3
Hi there! Her pride kept her from ducking her head, and her stubbornness kept her from backing down. I like this. Even though it's chapter 14, we're still learning about ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter 4
Hi there! This girl never ceased to amaze him. Brave one moment, and frightened the next. And not too proud to show it. How awesome is the part I underlined?? ...
Oct 15, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 14 Part 2
Hi there! I'm behind... again. Looks like I've got some catching up to do. I like this part of the chapter. I like it because it's a reminder that Obi ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: Deleted #5
Hi there! I totally had to look up what a 'palm frond' was -_- Don't judge me. Now that I understand what they are, I have to say I disagree ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: Anomaly: Chapter 1.1
Hi there! Hanna Vocorib. The name rolled over on my tongue as I distantly thought about the girl behind the computer screen. This is probably just a personal preference, but ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Two)
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. It's been a while, Skins! Glad to see you back :) I went back to reread the first chapter, thinking I'd forgotten ...
Oct 8, 2014
