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Hi there! This is a good poem. I like how you made it a letter. It's well written and I enjoyed reading it. I only have one critique and it's ...

Hi there! There isn't really anything bad for me to say about this. I like it and I can't wait to read the rest of it. We just finished talking ...

My corrections are in red. jedigeek wrote: You Just Don't listen You are perfect , perfect for me and I know it. You are everything I want in a guy ...

The movie was really good. I don't know if you guys read the book or not, but it wasn't a bad interpretation from the book. I know the commercials made ...

I love this! The story is cute and makes me smile. You humans seem to feel sorry for the food you eat without asking us how we feel about the ...

That was very interesting, I really like it. What I like is how informal it is, and because it's not a continuing story, it works. (Wow, I just re-read that ...

Hey there! I would like to say I enjoyed this story very much. I like how each paragraph displays a different thought, like a little piece of his memory each ...

I personally like this peom. I understand what you're trying to say and I can see everything that you are describing. I agree with rememberme, you should really capitalize the ...

This is a really good poem. You used great imagery when describing the snowflakes. I like how you compared the snowflakes to other wonders in nature. Your rhyming even works ...

I'd told you I care and I'd do what you want. I said I would live with you, and follow you anywhere. I followed when you left, and sold my ...

This was really, really, really good. I could feel everything you were describing and I could see it in my head. You definatly captured that day very well. Thank you ...

This is a good poem. I like the whole idea you've got going here. Although, with a rhyming poem, you run the rick of making your lines sound forced. I ...

If you were a fish, I would let you swim away If you were a fish, however your not, I wouldn't let you leave I feel like you contradicted yourself ...

I really like the imagery you use in this poem. The only thing I would suggest is using some punctuation. To me this poem just keeps going, and going, and ...

Oh my gosh this is so amazing! You did a great job with this story. I am a huge fan of the series to, and you definatly did it justice. ...