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That was very interesting, I really like it. What I like is how informal it is, and because it's not a continuing story, it works. (Wow, I just re-read that sentence and it sounded really awkward. Oh well, I hope you know what I meant.) You did a really great job with this.
Wow. Just wow. It's...wow. Okay, besides wow, it's intriguing. Ha! I knew you were messed up! I like it. I like this drabbling. It's cool. I like the irony. I like that you made it a journal, that you let us in your head. You have a few grammatical and punctuation errors but that is it. You can run that through a word processor. It's awesome though. Really. I love it.
I LOVE IT!!! It's really good, even without being a real story. Perfect title.
Ciao.