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  • Hello! Horizon/NoOne here to leave a quick review on your work! I haven’t reviewed in a while, so it might be a bit wonky. Your poem is really powerful and ...

    Aug 4, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic
    Re: Something about Monsters - Life 2/6

    I- what? I’m so shocked that I’m not even using my normal opening. But that was Death’s “domain”, so why did he cause- aggghhh! I have to agree with the ...

    Jun 28, 2024

  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Thread Still Lingers… (Proof of Concept)

    Heyo! Horizon/NoOne/whatever name you like here. After two days of straight up ignoring the review button (I love procrastination), I have finally returned with the review in my clutches! Yippee! ...

    Jun 28, 2024


  • Heyo! Horizon (or NoOne) here to leave a short review on your amazing poem! First Impressions + What I Liked This was really long, and so emotional. The repetition of ...

    Jun 26, 2024

  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Goodbye forever, Never Mine - part II

    Heyo! Horizon/NoOne here to leave a short review on this amazing work! First Impressions + What I Liked I went back and read part 1 before this, and wow, this ...

    Jun 25, 2024

  • Article / Essay » Other, Satire
    Re: From The Passages of James T. House

    Heyo! Horizon (aka NoOne) here to give a short review on your work! First Impressions + What I Liked It sort of feels like an article written by someone who’s ...

    Jun 22, 2024

  • Short Story » Romantic, Fanfiction
    Re: ❤️ Whispers of Unspoken Longing 💚

    Heyo! Horizon/NoOne here to leave a short review! First Impressions + What I Liked From what I can tell, this is a lovely little story on how a man wooed ...

    Jun 17, 2024

  • Other » Fanfiction, Science Fiction
    Re: In the end, there is only memory.

    Heyo! Just dropping by to leave a quick review! First Impressions + What I Liked At first glance, it seems like a well written and detailed work. I love how ...

    Jun 16, 2024


  • Heyo! Just dropping by to leave a short review. All of your poems were amazingly written, but I’ll only review two of them as…it’s a lot. expectations i live down ...

    Jun 15, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction
    Re: 21 questions

    Heyo! Horizon/NoOne here just dropping by to leave a short review! First Impressions + What I Liked The first two lines made me think that the person mentioned wasn’t really ...

    Jun 14, 2024

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Kulhad (Pot)

    Heyo! This work was posted quite some time ago, so I hope you don’t mind me leaving a quick review! First Impressions + What I Liked Nice slice-of-life type story ...

    Jun 13, 2024

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: A girls guide to being pretty in college.

    Heyo! I saw this work in the green room and thought I’d leave a quick review! First Impressions + What I Liked Your poem touches on the idea of being ...

    Jun 12, 2024

  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy
    Re: Dawnbringer

    Heyo! Just dropping by for a quick review. I’m not that great with short story reviews, but I’ll try my best! First Impressions + What I Liked Your story is ...

    Jun 11, 2024

  • Other » General, General
    Re: When you bake a cookie

    Heyo! Just thought I’d drop by to leave a rather quick review. First Impressions + What I Liked I came in expecting some deep message into the struggles and meaning ...

    Jun 10, 2024

  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic
    Re: chemistry reactions

    Heyo! This is a rather old work, so I hope you don’t mind me leaving a quick review! I’ll be trying a slightly different review style today. First Impressions The ...

    Jun 9, 2024


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