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Re: Joni - Prologue
Hey! Happy Review Day! Any corrections will be in bold! “Do you remember this?” he said, looking into the little girl’s almond eyes. Captain Magnar had retold this story over ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Just a New City and a New Home
Hey! Happy Review Day! Corrections will be made in bold, if any are present! I watched as we passed over the bridge into the city and I could see all ...
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Re: Pure Terror
Hey! Happy Review Day! Corrections will be made in bold, if any are there. "Are you ready for bed, Ali?" My Mom called up to me. I rolled my eyes ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Lost
Hey! Happy Review Day! Per request, I shall review. Corrections will be made in bold! Lost Boom! Ashley stared, her face soaked with tears. The Shifties had found them. And ...
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Re: They Don't Know
Hi! Happy Review Day! They always think the deaf are dumb. They assume that we don't know. But I can see. I see them whispering. I watch as they point ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Things You Never Should Have Said
Hey there! Happy Review Day! 1. I farted. Really. This is a natural thing.But I do feel that in a social environment, it should not be said. 2. Are you ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Équilibre
Hey there, Dragon! Happy Review Day! Your title brought me here, it's great. “I am not telling you again, Ross,” she said, glaring across the room at her younger brother. ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Simply Complicated - McFly and Youtube - 1
Hello! Happy Review Day! First off, I will say I read a bit of it. This is so long, it would be smart to split it into separate parts. The ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Most Exciting-Terrifying-Super-Exstatic-Fun-arific-Ultra-Scary-Adventure
I will be completely honest with you. I came to review because your friend recommended to do so. And honestly, your story is so long... could you split it into ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: A shadow
Hi! Happy Review Day! I will be reviewing your short. Corrections will be in bold! "I don't get it," I mumble again and hit my pillow once more. I decide ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Blood Lies & Alibis
Hey there! Happy Review Day! I am going to review this wonderful story. Spelling corrections will be in bold. Grammar correction as well. I strained my eyes against the morning ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Man Who Regrets
Hey. This is Nike. And you've just met one of the Doctor Who fans *me*. I don't read poems, but when I got onto the club Doctor Who, someone mentioned ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness
Hey there. Saw this in the Green Room. I'm not the one to do a lot of reviews, but once in a while, I will. When I first started to ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Memories in the Making (A Homecoming Story)
Hey there, heart! Here we are, on Review Day. Second review for moi. Let's get going, shall we? I prop my feet up on the dashboard of my best friend’s ...
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Re: To Be Watching
GRAVITY! Hey there. I'm Nike *shakes hand* nice to meet you. Here's my review on Review Day! You're my first review today, so be excited :3 She is beautiful. I've ...
Oct 27, 2013
