NightsInWhiteSatin

Interesting, dreamy and with a twist. You captured the dreamy feeling perfectly, there a few things I noticed that did that for me. First of, you got dream logic just ...

Seems simple, hits deep. When you said that warmth is what you feel "When you are where you belong", that hit me emotionally. It helped me understand what I always ...

There are a few things you need to kick off a story right. Looks to me like you get that. There isn't too much going on here, but it gets ...

Well done. You made a poem that helps to understand what it feels like to say goodbye, and argues that truthfully there is no such thing as a good goodbye. ...

This was a very interesting short play you wrote, Ignorance. I like how in a story so short you managed to give the two main heroes personalities. I also like ...

Wow, this was some great stuff you've written Ilium417. I love the idea of a self-aware fairytale, I think it's a great concept, one that I believe leaves a lot ...

This is a poem that deals with the passing of time. You showed us the darker side of that, which is pretty neat, not everything is flowers and joy. The ...

I won't pretend I know much about the issue of suicide. I personally never felt that awful feeling, but this poem gives me a little insight to what that might ...

I love the perspective of a begginer writer this one gives. The language and metaphor is very simple, but I believe that's exactly what makes this one good, you're not ...

This poem started with a very interesting premise. You managed to show death as something beautiful, kinda reminded me of my favourite movie, the Fountain (I cannot recommend it to ...

I really liked this poem. It didn't blow me away with the language or emotion, but you gave me a new perspective at something as simple, as looking into a ...