NightOwl

Well, the reason why you don't really get the plot and all that is because it's not a story at all. It's an essay. Haha, I guess you could see ...

Well, it is from the dictionary, I just cut some stuff out and spaced it out a bit xD My tablet was being funky and wouldn't let me look it ...

No big deal xD S'all good.

I originally wrote it for character development, actually. Since it's based off of a character I made recently, I was hoping to get some new ideas when writing. So I ...

It's based off of a character in one of my newest stories. Supposed to be kinda his theme (before I cut some stuff, it even had 'Olivers Poem' originally in ...

Hello! Really, I have nothing to correct. This was wonderful! The characters were intriguing and the plot was suspenseful. I found myself scanning to read the next line. It was ...

Hello! Nice job using the smilies and metaphors! Very descriptive, though the phrase 'like sky full of bright stars they look' seems a little awkward to me. Maybe you should ...

This comment made me smile >.< Thanks! You just made my day.

Thank you! :D

Aw >.< Thank you so much!

You actually got the idea pretty much correct. I always wake up having a warm feeling, but never really remembering why. I have the worst memory ever xD Thank you ...

Thanks! :)

Thank you so much! :D

Oh, alright. I think I get it now :D