Nica

Okay so the whole comment about her being the "last of them" is being explained later in the book. Her mom isn't part of her bloodline so maybe I should've ...

Thanx for reviewing! :)

Thanks for the amazing review! This was a ton of great advice :) I'll definitely be doing some serious editing.

Great job, sis! Love how you twisted the story up so Luke turns evil. :) I'll have to review this tomorrow :)

Well, I thought that it was sexual only because I didn't understand the line. Now that I do understand, it makes a whole lot more sense. I think you should ...

Great first chapter! Keep up the good work @timmyjake @Deanie I'm won't review this since I already took a red pen to a paper copy. lol

I did not know that ghosts leave behind goo! I'll have to remember that lol

Hey! Nica here to give you a review :) This is seriously the funniest poem I've read in a long, long time. Just the idea of a drama between the ...

You're welcome!

Wow!! This is probably the best review I've ever received. Thanx! :) You gave me some great advice.

Since I'm not online that much, could you tag me when you post another work? I really like your work and want to read more. Thanx :)

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omigosh! you laughed and right after you said that you wouldn't! Sooooo hurt right now! ;) Just kidding. Anyways, thanks for the review :)

Great! I wasn't really sure if he was in a car or not. So yes, you put it across pretty well since I got that impression. :)

The line where it says "Into eyes that saw it no" is supposed to read "Into eyes that saw it not." Just thought I would clarify.