Neverland

Hello! This is a short piece, but it feels very strong. When I read it, it flowed very well and it seemed to be "just right". But I don't understand ...

Hello! This is a well-written poem that is quite motivational and very emotional. Good job. When I was reading this poem, I couldn't help but feel like the flow is ...

Hello! First of all, this is a very well-written poem. In the beginning, I was a bit confused about how it might progress, but the last stanza cleared my confusions ...

Hello! Despite never being a fan of horror stories, I certainly enjoyed reading this one. It's very spooky and the ending was priceless. The story flows incredibly well, but there ...

Hello! This is a very cute poem. It was a joy to read. I know other people have already pointed it out, but there is a typo on the 5th ...

Hello! This is a very well-written poem. It sort of reminds me of one of my own never-completed short stories. I noticed one tense error: With all these thing that ...

Hello! There are a couple grammatical errors that I will be addressing. I'm not going to touch the content because I do not know anything about hockey. The smarter side ...

Hello! This is a very well-written poem. Very deep and uplifting, it was a joy to read. I don't have much to say, except there were a couple grammatical mistakes ...

Hello! This is a wonderful poem. I especially liked the first 4 lines because the rhythm and rhyme was consistent and beautiful. On the 5th line, instead of saying "When ...

Hello! To begin, in the 1st phrase, I believe "Garden of Eden" needs to be capitalized because it is a reference to the bible. The 2nd phrase does not make ...

Hello! I really really really really like this poem. I cannot stress how hard this poem hits me in the feels. I have a question about the 2nd to last ...

Hello, I'm not sure if it's just me, but I feel like this story is incomplete. Will there be a continuation to this, or does it just end here? I ...