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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anxiety

    I really enjoyed this poem. Even writing this in thirty minutes (not that thirty minutes is too short; I say this because I know that some poems take a really, ...

    Jul 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: SHE

    I'm going to begin this review by saying that I enjoyed this poem very, very much. I admire the exquisite vocabulary you use, and I feel as though it's extremely ...

    Jul 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: let me go

    Hello! I'm NerdTrash6000, and I'm happy I had the opportunity to read your poem. To begin, I can't really find any big mistakes that need addressing. Your poem is short ...

    Jul 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: The value of greatness.

    ...Wow. That's my first thought. Wow. This was a really interesting short story. Your style is just so distinct, as is your voice, and I'm happy I stumbled across this. ...

    Jun 26, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: That's My Voice

    Hello, there! I'm actually quite happy I stumbled across this poem. I like the message a lot, and I think this poem illustrates it well, however, I noticed that it ...

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Silence

    Wow...This poem is quite intriguing, especially looking at it from a standpoint in which you're looking at the big picture. It's very simplistic, and it holds a lot of meaning; ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (1) Snippets from my WIP, 'Five Emerge'

    Hello! It's a pleasure to meet you. Today, I will review your WIP, to give you some pointers and extra tips. This particular piece of work is very intriguing and ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Transcendental Numbers

    Oh, my god, I'm in tears right now. This writing drove me to tears and I'm literally sobbing as I'm writing this, not gonna lie. I'm a state of shock ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Make-Believe Ch.1

    Hello! I would like to start off my review by saying that I really liked this story. It has kept my interest through and through, most definitely, though I believe ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    I rather like how you wrote this. It's short and easy to read, plus the way you ended it was great. So kudos for the great story! I'd like to ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: First Day Catastrophe

    Oh my GOSH this is so amazing! I got so sucked into it and I felt for Emily. I love how you portrayed the characters and I'm so so happy ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An experiment

    I love the idea of this so much! It's so passionate and it spoke to me on an emotional level. You did a very good job! However, I would like ...

    Jun 21, 2016


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