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Nelly101

Nelly101

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: You're gonna shine! :D

    Great this makes me think of bullying therepy for some reason. Good punchuation, good words, it rhymed right? haha the end 'Oh, just shine...' this piece of work isnt the ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: No More

    Very long, Good that your celebrating the 50th anniversary. Good words, Punchuation is very good. I liked the rythem, It rhymed. You focaused on each doctor as you said yourself ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DragonSlayer - Short story

    Amazing. _______ I can see a picture in my head of this it described very well. Its a bit long I had to skip through bits so I'm sorry if ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I'm sorry

    Hey it's Nelly here Aka. Neko I like this, except from the punchuation order makes me dizzy. I've read some of your other work this relates to the topic you ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was lost...

    Amazing work ___________ This is very relatable, the emotion is amazing. correct punchuation here- me to be the ones to suffer and be sad, if I did end up ending ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: so your thinking about me

    Hello :) I enjoyed this, It is a good piece. But for some reason, I didn't feel this. Very sweet, It's very short which is very good. Because some people ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Your Heart Is Where I Belong

    Good piece _________ I enjoyed this piece. The rhyhem I enjoyed. I wonder what made you think of these. Is it something that you can relate to? very sweet. Does ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully

    Amazing work. Welldone on your successful work, I didnt quite understand it. probably because I'm tired, but I liked the description you used. And the little quotes are very pretty. ...

    Dec 4, 2013


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