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Re: You're gonna shine! :D
Great this makes me think of bullying therepy for some reason. Good punchuation, good words, it rhymed right? haha the end 'Oh, just shine...' this piece of work isnt the ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: No More
Very long, Good that your celebrating the 50th anniversary. Good words, Punchuation is very good. I liked the rythem, It rhymed. You focaused on each doctor as you said yourself ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: DragonSlayer - Short story
Amazing. _______ I can see a picture in my head of this it described very well. Its a bit long I had to skip through bits so I'm sorry if ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: I'm sorry
Hey it's Nelly here Aka. Neko I like this, except from the punchuation order makes me dizzy. I've read some of your other work this relates to the topic you ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: I was lost...
Amazing work ___________ This is very relatable, the emotion is amazing. correct punchuation here- me to be the ones to suffer and be sad, if I did end up ending ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: so your thinking about me
Hello :) I enjoyed this, It is a good piece. But for some reason, I didn't feel this. Very sweet, It's very short which is very good. Because some people ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Your Heart Is Where I Belong
Good piece _________ I enjoyed this piece. The rhyhem I enjoyed. I wonder what made you think of these. Is it something that you can relate to? very sweet. Does ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully
Amazing work. Welldone on your successful work, I didnt quite understand it. probably because I'm tired, but I liked the description you used. And the little quotes are very pretty. ...
Dec 4, 2013
