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I would agree with silented1 - the word 'nostalgia' in itself if such a nostalgic word, and makes me feel the emotion without you having to say much else! Your ...

Generally, I'd say that rhyming poems seem happier and more upbeat than free-verse which can tend to get quite serious and sombre. For this type of a poem, I'd recommend ...

I enjoyed the poem as a whole, and, most of all, I absolutely LOVED the idea of doing it as a play, with acts. I thought that it could have ...

Here, as requested! This was a beautiful love poem – may I call it that? – and I liked the innovative use of language, and fresh ideas, original descriptions. You ...

So...I wondered who would dare review this since you've put it up. Firstly, because it was the amazing, the one-and-only Snoink, and secondly, because of the content. What rating is ...

Heya - I've written weird-as comical pieces like this before, with just the dialogue and nothing else, so I knew I'd be in for a laugh. However, it wasn't as ...

Time for this review you requested! So...overall, I like the IDEA behind the poem - a criminal running away from the police after having committed a crime (which may or ...

Hey Rachel! Firstly, I think that starting it with a passive line was a bit strange, since I thought you'd be recounting the story to us in the past tense ...

I LOVED the opening line. I am a big fan of a good 'hook' in a story, and it worked well here - It was a cold day, the sort ...

Hi Nyiiri! Well, I always wondered what style of writing goes into General Fiction - and clearly, it's just about everything. Okay, I'll review this in reverse to how I ...

The title was certainly intriguing - so well done on creating an enticing title (not that I judge a poem by it; but it DOES make it all the more ...

I just wanted to say that your opening line was brilliant: With foreign dust on my shoulders This is intriguing - without being over-the-top imaginative and hard for us to ...

Hey Jagged! Good to see some more of your work - and I have to say: I LOVE poems about physics (I enjoy physics, and I think there's a certain ...

Heya - Kyerra, the character (or the person) and the narrator (you, perhaps?) certainly have an intriguing relationship, and I think it would be better if you dwelt for longer ...

Hey, just from a quick skim read, I can tell that TenYo makes for a very interesting person! However, because he is so interesting, I'd suggest breaking up his separate ...