Nate

You really are good at flash fiction and this is the best one I've read by you thus far. I didn't spot any grammatical errors, the sentence structure is perfect, ...

I thought that this was very good; definitely one of the best, if not the best, I've read by you thus far. It flows along well and doesn't sound disjointed ...

Another powerful poem by you... that last line is great. Only suggestion here is to take the apostrophe out of "shirt's, shoe's and tie's." It's not needed. Anyways, this is ...

Those are GREAT books; the only fantasy series that I managed to get through, including LOTR. My roommate last year introduced me to them, and after some initial hesitation, I ...

This poem rhymed really well, and it never got off beat. Everything you wrote sounded natural, and, well, I don't have any criticism at all. Great job!

I think it's great. You rhyme the entire way through, and somehow you manage to make it sound all very natural. Not only that, but you kept the same consistent ...

I've actually never heard of the author, but it does sound good. I'll put it down on my wish list.

lol, KND is Kids Next Door. It's a show about these kids who live in a clubhouse and are international spies (or something like that) on cartoon network. And yeah, ...

The kid (he) is in the fourth grade, and this is really his first story. He's written some before this, but he always dumps it after the second sentence, lol. ...

A pretty funny poem... I like it. My guess is that you're talking about a shirt? Anyways, there are a few points that need fixing up: "And skip toward the ...