Mysticalxx

Alright..........this is inappropriate......

I really like it! It's..........really nice and funny, and for some reason I don't know, nostalgic. Just one thing I'd like to point out: you spelled one spell wrong. It's ...

Thanks! I followed your advice. Good for you to point that out!

Thank you! The thing is, it is impossible to not be cliche at some time, and I couldn't think of any other simile, so I wrote that one. Thanks for ...

Thanks! For the praise and constructive criticism! :) i appreciate it.

No offence, but WHAT IN THE WIDE WORLD IS THIS?! My brain is truly mushed.

Ravelpuff! Good name, but shouldn't it be GryRavelpuff, since I got equal parts Gryffindor too? Or something like this?

For some reason, I was smirking as I read this. Good job, however! You could've made it a bit more creative and funny, but it's nice as it is, too.

I turn out to be equally either a Hufflepuff, a Ravenclaw or a Gryffindor. Ha! I liked the quiz, it was a fun one. Your writing style is good. Please ...

Sure!

I like it! Update soon!

Thank you so much, for the praise AND the wlecome! People are so friendly here, it seems strange. I sure will check out your work! :)

Thank you for pointing out the mistakes! I'll do better, thanks!

I like your essay! Although I have to say it would've been seemed more impressive when you spoke it. My fav. paragraph is 'It has been joked about for decades........' ...

Hiya! I thought I'd say a few things. Firstly, I'm really looking forward to the rest of your work, but I could give you some suggestions. The things with writers ...