Mysticalxx

hello, thanks for reviewing! As I said, some of the syllable count isn't correct, but not ALL of them are wrong. I mean "Cake", and "Dreams" have the correct syllable ...

As for the reference to Helen Keller, well, excuse me if I couldn't find anyone else. Isn't she herself enough for you? And I am human: I couldn't have remembered ...

Read the note at the top that I newly wrote. You guys are all getting my message wrong, okay? And whatever you say, Atsmai, these ARE favours, being able to ...

Thanks for reviewlng! No, no, you got my message wrong. I was JUST trying to say that we should stop being UNGRATEFUL and be satisfied with what we have. I ...

No, well, it might not be confusing, but the tenses ARE mixed up.

Thanks for reviewing! The thing is, haiku are meant to be written bluntly, and describe "raw" images of whatever the subject is. As for the "birthday cake", I meant that ...

Okay!

This review WAS of help to me! Thanks! :D Yes, I realise that the second poem is really weird, but it's how I wrote when I was little. So I ...

Thank you! In regards to the first poem, I meant for the lines to have too many words. :) I just don't want to edit it, because it's a reminder ...

Thanks! :)

Wow! Great description you've used here, although it made me feel hungry, okay? :) It also has an old fashioned sense to it, like it was written by some long ...

Haha, funny poem! You used the type of humour called DISCREET yet WITTY. :) I like it very much. I skimmed through your other works too, which were really deep ...

I like it! Its a song, isn't it? I really like how you've rhymed the lines, and yet not quite rhymed them. The title is really good. Just one question: ...

Haha, true! You took references from Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, and........who else? :) Anyway, this is nice. Mysticalxx

Haha! Really funny! The text under '10:49 am' really had me snicker! :) The only thing is that you need to work on punctuation, but overall its' hilarious! Keep writing! ...