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  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Science Re: The Existence of God

    Hey! So, to start off, I just want to say I think Darwinism could have a direct correlation to god. If you believe in a god of any kind, most ...

    Feb 16, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Stuck in the Past

    Heya! First of all, Age 99. Lol. Glad I found that before reading. Oop I thought this was so vivid and beautiful. Usually, I split my reviews up into lots ...

    Feb 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Strange Thing Called Popularity

    Heya! This is my on Young Writer's Society at 7 pm because I can't think of anything else to do... but anyway This is a beautiful poem - it covers ...

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Horror Re: Winter Heaven

    Heya! This is an awesome personification of a landscape - I don't think I've seen anything like it before, I love that the stanzas have their own "themes", if you ...

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 7.1

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    Feb 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Online Learning

    Heya! Ha! This is beautifully written - I love it! Poetry is amazing, I'm so glad I read this! It's so marvelous how you wove it all together, especially with ...

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Prologue: Train Hopper

    Woah. I love Andy already, and I haven't even gotten to know them yet! I hope I get to see more of them, and your writing! Kudos for creating a ...

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 23.2

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    Feb 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Car journey

    Heya! This is so beautifully descriptive - you are beginning to become one of my favorite authors to read from on here! I'm going to start setting up my reviews ...

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Secrets of a president, a scientist and a fisherman

    Hey! I'm going to split this review into sections, as I'll do in the future. Here we go: Sentence structure/grammar: I would split this into smaller chunks. Maybe after the ...

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 8

    I love this-super description! I found this on the Green Room section, so I haven't read the previous chapters, but wow! Richard feels like a real, 3d human being. The ...

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 2: "The...Child?"

    So I read the chapter before this. I myself tend to get burned out and produce a slightly worse quality chapter after I finish the first one, but apparently, you're ...

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose - Ch.II: The Intruder 1

    I found this from the green room and...wow. This is super descriptive. I don't have the context of other chapters, but this itself was so descriptive and compelling that I ...

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Cloud

    This is beautifully descriptive. It's as if I can see the cloud as you describe it, or maybe I'm seeing the cloud through you seeing the cloud...? Anyway, what I'm ...

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 1: "The Child"

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    Wow. That was...I love this. I'm looking forward to reading part 2 after I finish this review- the only thing I would change is that the child is being repetitively ...

    Feb 9, 2021


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