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Wow. I really really liked this. Nice job. I gave you a star! It's so incredibly amazing, really. My only critique and this isn't a critique at all. Is to ...

AWw. This was so sweet. I loved it. Listen to the whispers that dance across your face; watch them breeze past you as they continue on their race. Invisible yet ...

This poem had some nice parts, but it is overdone to the point that I can't recognize your writing style and I only vaguely know what your talking about. Important ...

I really like this. It's so sassy. And screams at you in a way. Very Very Good. You have a very unique style. I have nothing critical to say except ...

I loved this so much. It was so pretty and sweet. The only thing that I would suggest is gong back and making sure the rhythm in the last stanza ...

Wow. This was beautiful. I don't know exactly how you did it, but the way you wrote this poem or maybe it is just your all sounded like a whisper ...

I really like this. It was niiiice.LOL. This is inspired by the Salem Witch Trials a little isn't it?..sounds like it anyway. The only real fault that I noticed is ...

Don't knock on yourself so much. :D Especially since you really are good. And also because if you keep talking about how bad it is it makes people not want ...

Nice job! I really liked the idea but thought that it was a little bit rough. Like it should be edited more. And be a little more specific in a ...

Wow. Amazing work!! I really enjoyed reading this. I honestly couldn't find anything really wrong with it. I loved the emotional intensity and it is extremely powerful when read out ...

Niiiece wooork. I liked the concept, but I think there are a few things that could make this even better. The entire poem seems to rushed for the idea your ...

Perfect is just a word, But it causes so much pain. Pressure, yet another word That I look on with disdain. Aching, I criticize myself, Because I am not good ...

I really like the idea.It's interesting. My advise would be to treat this dog character like you would any human character. ---Give the dog a personality ---Add some visuals in ...

Good job! :D I really liked the concept and the imagery in this. It was like you were slowly painting a picture in my mind using your words. But I ...

Niiice. Honestly, I didn't see where you were going until the end. Haha. I was like whaaat. Anyway. I guess I should add more words here to make this review ...