Perfect (REVISED)

I have no idea what possessed me to write this but I guess I'll just throw it out there...

Enjoy.

EDIT: I revised it, using the suggestions of those who replied! Thank you guys!

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I had a dream once upon a time,

that I was flying,

simply flying,

mingling with the stars and watching comets go by,

and playing hide and seek with the wind,

and then I raced with the raindrops that fell from their mother clouds

toward the earth going fast,

but I was not scared,

I was calm,

simply calm.

The sea swallowed me up in the folds of her dark blue dress,

and I swam down down,

and ran my nonexistent fingers through the anemones of many colors,

but they did not sting me,

and the eels and the fish and the dolphins,

and sharks and whales all swam around me,

and I was joyful,

simply joyful.

Then I stepped up on the land and making no footprints or sounds,

I watched the trees the tall tall trees,

holding conversations and enjoying the cool evening,

and I didn't care to talk to them,

I preferred to listen to the stories,

the wonderful stories they told,

about the moon and the sun,

and the beauty of the world that everyone else was too busy to notice.

Then I took the branches of the tallest tree,

and I climbed high high high to the top,

and I watched the eagles soar,

and I observed the world around me,

and it was beautiful,

simply beautiful,

and I was free,

simply free.