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Re: A Little Bit of Blood
Hello! I'm here to leave a little comment/review~ I really enjoyed this story, right off the bat I was hooked by your first paragraph: Aveline was Harvey’s only remedy to ...
May 19, 2025 -
Re: Comfortable Torture
Hellooo, NickS39! I'm here to leave a quick review! Can I just say, wow? I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Thought-provoking stories are some of my favorites. Is it odd I ...
Jun 3, 2024 -
Re: A Tale of Thousand Trees
Welcome to YWS microwavey!! This is a great tale to kick off your writing journey with YWS! I'm here to leave a little review telling you about all the awesome ...
Mar 12, 2024 -
Re: The First Visit (Part 1)
I'd like to start off by saying congrats on publishing your first story and welcome to YWS!! Now on to the review... If there's one thing I love, it's a ...
Mar 11, 2024 -
Re: Even Stars Fall
Hey, Rae! This story was absolutely beautiful and so well written. Your use of imagery is SO well done and perfectly portrays what the character is feeling. In this paragraph: ...
Dec 15, 2023 -
Re: Wonderland Wanderlusters #FriendshipPoems
Hi! I'm here to leave a comment/review! This poem is so cute and super well written! I adore the Alice In Wonderland theme! It's great how this can be taken ...
Aug 16, 2023 -
Re: Moving on
Hello, I'm here to leave a little comment/review! I remember reading "A Jumbled Love Letter" awhile back and it's nice to see the narrator remains consistent even though the relationship ...
Aug 16, 2023 -
Re: A jumbled love letter
Helloo! I'm here to leave a little comment/review~ This piece really captures the emotions and thoughts one has when falling in love while still being on the journey of discovering ...
Jul 17, 2023 -
Re: Gifted
Hello! I'm here to leave a little review/comment! :) This is a beautiful poem, It has a great message and it's well written. I love how the words flow and ...
Jul 12, 2023 -
Re: Basement Window | Strange Sights
Hellooo! I'm here to leave a lil review/comment! ^^ Let me begin by saying w000w! That was well written and super spooky. Seriously, you had me looking at my blank ...
Jul 6, 2023 -
Re: Helen and John’s story-Ghost House
Hello! I'm here after reading Rosalies Story-Ghost House, I enjoy that one and this short story did NOT disappoint. I love how you were able to characterize Helen and John ...
Jun 22, 2023 -
Re: Rosalie’s story-Ghost House
Hello! I'm here to leave a quick review/comment. :) I really like this short story! The fast pace adds to the tension Rosalie is feeling and the simple style reflects ...
Jun 21, 2023 -
Re: Shadow of the Orange Tree
Hello! I'm here to leave a quick little review/comment! :) This is such a nice short. I love the way it tackles the thoughts of a grieving and remorseful person ...
Jun 4, 2023 -
Re: The Reflection
Hello! I'm here to leave a quick review/comment! :)) I really like this poem! You had me hooked from the first stanza, especially the last line, "Only seeing reflecting glass ...
Jun 2, 2023 -
Re: The Unworthy Hero
Hello! I'm here to leave a little review/comment! :) Let me lead by saying that I really enjoyed this short story even though we don't know the world or characters ...
Jun 1, 2023
