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Hi! I'm Music. No corrections or advice? Okay. *zips lips* Overall, I really quite enjoyed this poem! I thought it flowed nicely. The ending stanza captured how awkward deep conversation ...

Hi, Peyton! Music here. Again. :) One nit-pick before I do overall. Can’t put them down, far to o hard. I thought the concept of this poem was nice. The ...

Hi! I liked this poem. It flowed really well and showed YWS a little love! That's what it needs. :wink: No nit-picks on grammar, spelling, etc. Odd for me not ...

Hi! It's Music! :) The sound of elegant[s],[/s] ball gowns swishing together and boring, steady [s]sound of[/s] waltz music was [s]the sound[/s] what I heard as I arrived at the ...

Hi! I'm Music. So a collage-poem, eh? I'm about to have to do one for my English class. I thought this one was composed pretty well! A nit-pick: [s]Trun[/s] Turn ...

Hi there! I'm Music, and I'll be reviewing you today. :wink: Generally , this curse disfigures the princess in one way or another, or it sends her into a long ...

Hi! I'm Music. I really liked the description here! Great job. I could picture it perfectly. One nit-pick: These are the days of yesterday, today, tomorrow—three days and many years ...

Hi, Romance! I'm Music, here to review for you today. :) I watched her as she walked gracefully towards the huge, wooden double doors of Cuthbert Hall, with her head ...

Shina! I haven't talked to you in forever! Remember when I was new and you helped me out... Aww, memories. Haha. Anyway, I'm reviewing your poem today. (Duh.) Haha. You ...

Hi! I'm Music, a.k.a. your grammar stickler for today. :wink: Quivering, quaking, quiet heart, Creating waves in every part, And shaking me from inside out . My brains calls out, ...

Hi, Claeren! I'm Music. The snow falls down, Purest white. It flutters down, Out of the sky. Landing softly, Not a sound. While all are sleeping, Unaware[s]s[/s]. All except a ...

Hi, darling! Music here to give my grammar corrections and overall impressions! It didn’t matter where I turned. It didn’t matter where I was. It [s]defiantly[/s] definitely didn’t matter if ...

Hi, Vivacious! I'm Music, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. :) Extend my hand, Biting my lip, I reach . . . Who says it’s that bad? Is it ...

Hi! I'm Music. I'll be critiquing you today. I thought it was a pretty good poem for a beginner! Nice concept. Like the other reviewer before me, I liked the ...

Hi, Hannah! I'm Music and I'll be your reviewer today. :) Silken birds in crystal trees sway back and forth in waxen breeze preserved with trace of antique rain. Pale ...