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(her) Haha. Yes, I do get tired of experiencing number one. I have to say at the movie (I want with a bunch of my teenage friends) I got a ...

Hi, farikk! First off, I need to inform you that now you have to go review two pieces of work. You should review two pieces of work before you post ...

Clair sighed as she walked into the neighborhood library. Although, maybe you meant to spell it the other way... She needed to read some book about Alexander the Great for ...

The feel of my foot leaving th e floor, my body pivoting, my foot connecting with... nothing. I had missed! " Try again, sweetie." W hen he got to me, ...

The Earth doesn’t listen to you ; it will revolve beneath you whether your alive or not. I visit her from time to time, but she doesn’t even remember me. ...

Hey Princess! I'm sorry to say I'm not much of a critique-er when it comes to poetry... Novels and short stories are more my style. I just wanted to tell ...

Hi Shina! *Waves* Looks like I'll be reviewing you... Anyway, I thought it was a pretty good poem. In my opinion, it flowed quite nicely. My favorite part was this: ...

What I want to know... How many of you who hate Twilight have actually read the series? Taken time to try and appreciate it? While I will admit Stephenie (And ...

Hiya! Nothing special to post here... Critiquing poems isn't my forte. :oops: Anyway, I found that I liked the poem! It seemed a bit humorous to me. Am I wrong ...

Oh, June. I just clicked on this. Throughout the entire poem I was hoping it was fiction. It was tragic and utterly sad, but it was completely beautiful, too. I'm ...

*toots horn and throws confetti everywhere* Brilliant, I say, brilliant! Haha. Anti-pop, that poem was awesome. It combined comedy and craziness. (Although those two do go together quite a lot ...

Is that her? Judd Germaine thought to himself. If he's thinking to himself, it should either be quoted or in italics. I prefer italics, so the reader doesn't confuse it ...

Hi! I'll critique your story. Haha. Be forewarned, I am a complete grammar freak. :D I cried so hard that my body shook with grief, but I never allowed one ...

Very good! Okay, I'll admit... The only reason I clicked here in the first place was because I saw the word "Bob". Is that so wrong? Haha. Anyway, as PirateP ...

I pulled the sky blue bed covers over my head after I hit the snooze button on my alarm. I felt the "up" that comes after "covers" and before "over" ...