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Re: The Bible Isn't Moral Part 1 (Slavery)
I think this Essay was well thought out. You stated your claim and explained why you felt that way. I do feel like you could have used verses in the ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: Same Old
This is very well done. It has good flow and rhymes smoothly. Good job! I also think a lot of people can relate to it. I know I did. I ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: my hurt is worth your happy.
This touched me. The amount of raw emotion that went into the piece is beautifully done. This touched me because I have done that for almost every ex I have ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: MASK
This was really good! It's definitely something to think about. I know when I was a teen I had many masks. I had ones for my parents, my friends, the ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: Fears
Hello! I am Murphy and I'm just stopping by for a review. I really liked this piece. It instantly gave me chills. I like the end where it says no ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: I Stay Here
Greetings and salutations! Murphy here for a review! I really liked this poem. I think just about everyone can relate to it. I feel like it has a bittersweet feel ...
Jan 7, 2018 -
Re: Lowest Point
Hello! Here for a review. I really liked this poem! Very well done. I can't say anything like this has happened to me so I can't relate but I know ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: I'm Leaving Home
Murphy here for a review. I want to hate this piece but it has such an important message to it. It's relatable on so many levels. I just hate crying ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: Goodbye
Hello! Time for a review. I really liked this. It was smooth to read and easy one the eyes. I can definitely relate to the story. I had a friend ...
Dec 18, 2017 -
Re: Crazy
Hi! Murphy here. I absolutely love love love this!!! I am also ridiculously crazy and proud of it! I cuss all the time and turn my music up loud as ...
Dec 18, 2017 -
Re: Colors
Hello! Murphy here for a review! I gotta say this is the weirdest poem I have read so far. That's not a bad thing at all haha. I love the ...
Dec 18, 2017 -
Re: Lost to You
Murphy here for a review! I really liked this poem. I can relate to it because I have always been reckless with my heart. I have always been a hopeless ...
Dec 16, 2017 -
Re: A Passive Aggressive Thank You Note
Hello! Murphy here for a review and to return the favor. First of let me just say how much I love this. It really hits home for me because of ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: Nothing: Cold Wind (1)
Murphy here for a review. You left one on my novel so I thought I would return the favor :) Things I loved! Honestly, I loved all of it. You ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: People...
Murphy here for a review. I think this is a very powerful piece. I really get the sense you are reaching out which says a lot about you as a ...
Dec 12, 2017