MrMuddyPig

Good story, I have no idea what to say, but in order to make this a review, I will give you some advice! The writing is all perfect expect one ...

Good job! I LOVE this. I like the moral of the story: Be with the light and not take part in darkness. Now there is only one thing thought, its ...

Good story, the description lured me here. Well, there are some mistakes. mistake 1: you said "coz" I know you mean because but this is YWS not whatsapp. Mistake 2: ...

Nice poem, I like the rhythm and order put on such a small poem. I like how this descibes an apology clearly as well, here's some mistakes: with ‘It’ fine’s, ...

Great story! I like the story about escaping jail. Now since this story was kind of long, then same thing about this review, I hope you enjoy it: First of ...

I love this poem, its so funny, I know that's really random but that's what makes it funny. The rhyme is nice and the words are very simple, a poem ...

A poem which is not too bad or too good, I have no idea what to really say now other than keep using your great mind and keep writing poems ...

Hey, Mr.Muddy Pig here! Good poem, But there are some mistakes like: But never will I forge(t) I (will) miss you, since it (has) been quiet a while ( since ...

Hey, Mr. Muddy Pig here! Since I like countries and geographies, this was very interesting. But there are some stuff you need to improve on. Before you list how Tae ...

Hey, Mr. Muddy Pig here! The first thing I noticed is the character writing down in his journal is so stiff, give him a personality. The main character is boring. ...

Sorry but I kind of got confused on this, after reading the entire proluge all I understood was that there was a kidnapping of some sorts. In the end It ...

This is the funniest poem I have ever read in my life and explains alot about a person's life (because no one hates pizza) I like the sentence "you're slower ...