MrMuddyPig

I know that everyone will review the story, so I will review the things that people tend to ignore. Hey, this is Mr.Muddy Pig! I think a name such as ...

Hello! I'm Mr. Muddy Pig. I see this is sort of like news but it also has a story. It's unique. I like the jokes you have put but try ...

Hey! Mr. Muddy Pig trying to get a few points here. I'm not sure but I think this is Percy Jackson fan fiction. So I will review it like that. ...

Hey! Mr Muddy Pig trying to earn a few points here! I'm going to copy/paste some of your sentences, correct some of them and ask questions. 1.He was too skinny ...

Sup! I'm Just going to copy/paste some sentences, correct them and Ask Some questions. BIC lighter lights I have no idea what a BIC is, it is often best to ...

Sup I'm Just Going to Copy/Paste Some sentences, correct them and ask some questions. 1.From the age when man still used wooden and stone tools to a powerful era of ...

Sup I think You Have made up something: Interpreting a dream, If you put that in the start of the novel, it makes the reader want to focus. As if ...

Sup. I Just Copy Parts Of Your Story, Correct them And Then I Ask You A Question Or Two. 1.The window was covered up with a shade and my sight ...

Hey, Call me Mr Muddy Pig! 1.Why this was very hard to read, one whole giant paragraph, made me lose where I was. was a deep, vibrant brown, I don't ...

Hahahah. This was a funny story although it seems more of a joke story than a novel.(I just made up Joke Story) Anyway, off to the review. 1. Don't Make ...

The pig is in the house! Hello, here's a review. It took me quite a while to understand what was going on until the ending. It makes me want to ...

I like the story, it's hard to tell what happened before that. There are a couple of mistakes though, I will fix them now. 1. no cities remain populated. Doesn't ...

Not bad. Althought some punction is needed along with some commas here and there. Put a period after sign's(.) and put sigh in itailcs. Who's to say when punctuation? is ...

Sorry that I couldn't read all-the font was hurting my eyes. (The font is a bug, right?) So this feels like a poem other than it doesn't ryhme and that ...

Oh! Hey it rhymes! Nice poem but the ending is sad for me general, you have to share stuff even with people with don't share with you. But it's just ...