MrBrainwasher

It was a very good piece of writing. The way you described the atmosphere was so engrossing. Being an Indian, it felt very perfect description of a beautiful February morning. ...

This was a fine piece of writing. Although most of your mistakes have been covered by the previous reviewer, I'll go for the rest of them. " After, I didn’t ...

Okay, I'm gonna point out some mistakes, which I think you made. Correct me if you think otherwise. "...into buzzes and hums, and I felt peace a little." I think ...

It was nicely engineered I would say. Hy Ishan! MrBrainwasher here for a short review. As I said, It was nicely engineered, because first, you as a narrator tell the ...

I liked it despite of abundance of grammatical mistakes. Mostly I like the conclusion, how the experience in that inferno turned you into a person who knows how to avoid ...

Hi! Whatever you did there has got me here. Writing while drinking, awesome! Cheers! Now the review. I don't know why, but you should have edited the piece, after you ...

This is very nice piece of writing! The juvenile attempts to ruin the beauty of roses, literary killing them, which the Elizabeth thought of dearly is as big a sin ...

Hi there! I read it, premise was interesting, but writing was poor. Don't worry that's what you're here for, to improve. Let's get down to the business. Let's have an ...

Hi I hope you're having a wonderful time. Let's get down to the business. So a mother lost her son in some accident(?) which you thought of not revealing(the accident), ...

Hey lupa22! How you doing? You've written some amazing stuff up there. I'm astonished, you're just 11 years old. Very well done. Things I Liked You were very aptly descriptive. ...

Hello there! I haven't even started reading it and your sentences just won't stop. They keep going. I mean, you need to make sentences a little shorter. "It's just that ...

Most boring review. I think, if you replace ",and" with a ";" it will look better (that's what i think). Here, "I returned home to find our ornate dining room ...

Since you asked, whether the concept was confusing. To me, it wasn't. I got the idea, i was kind of thinking if not 100% then atleast the basic idea matches ...

These fear, soul and insecurities were running like persons in my mind. Beautifully written. "We couldn't inform you until later" That's what universe is writing to us. Beautiful Now review ...

You seemed very conscious about the word spontaneity. Over conscious in fact. But I must say, I was not able to get that feeling of spontaneity. The way you explained, ...