Morrigan

Hi truth, Would you mind pointing out the spelling mistakes for me? I%u2019m having trouble finding any. Thank you for your feedback!

I decided to experiment with the word "spindling" because it's unusual, and I wanted to draw parallels from spindles and spider legs (not to mention the alliteration!). I like that ...

I appreciate your feedback. I was wondering though-- since you didn't like how short it was, do you have any suggestions for me so I can build up more tension? ...

No problem, my dude. Thanks for posting!

Do you know much about car jacks? ;)

mUrDeR

murder your darlings it's ok if you're salty bby you're awesome and you wrote a good pome i just hold you to a higher standard because you're my friend

Thank you for your thoughts.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this lovely review. I'll see what I can do with the punctuation. As for the romance of black and white, I was trying ...

Thank you for your thoughts:)

Thank you very much. You gave me good insight, and I will edit accordingly ^_^

Thanks for the feedback! It's hard to see hiccups in phrasing when you're the one who wrote it yourself. I'm glad this poem resonated with you. Thanks again for your ...

Thanks, alliyah! I actually uploaded this on mobile, and couldn't get the stanza break to go away, so it was unintentional. I think I will do away with the first ...

Thanks bb

Yeah, man, no problem. It was a pleasure to read! If you want me to help you in a writerfeedpad sometime, just hit me up and I'll get in there ...