Morrigan

Hi there, Gimli. Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see new faces around! I think you've got some interesting concepts in this poem that can really work for you. The ...

Hi there, Gracie. You've got some good stuff going on here in these lyrics, and some stuff that needs work. I'm glad you chose to put this piece in the ...

Hi there, Veronica, and welcome to YWS! This is pretty awesome. I really like it. And I really don't say that to everyone. You have some excellent stuff going on ...

Hi there Kyle. First of all, DiskElemental gave you excellent advice on the titanpad. Check that out (he beat me to saying all of that, so this might be rather ...

Hi there, scissory! Welcome, welcome to YWS! It's truly a pleasure to have you here. I really liked this. I understand that it's unfinished, but I really want to know ...

Hi there, Audy. Oh my lord. Yes. This poem. Yes. Gosh. It's so-- I could sing its praises for hours. Your descriptions are great, your ending is awesome, and the ...

Hi, dogsy! Ah, MLA format. My favorite. While I haven't read this book, this essay certainly will make me think about it when I do read it (it's already on ...

Hi there, WritingWolf. I'm here to rescue your poem from the green room. I like how you organized this. It looks very neat in its three line stanzas. You did, ...

Hi there, bullhead. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. While this is cute, it gets cloyingly cute because of the thing you focused most on in ...

Hi there, constantia. I don't normally review prose, but I had a hankering for it today. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, you ...

Hi there deliroast. This is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Describing someone going through pain can be a very difficult subject to address. I appreciate your effort, ...

Hi there. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I appreciate your effort to bring back images of cupid mythology, but this poem is going to need ...

Hi there, Rainbow. Wow, this is a long poem! I'm going to go stanza by stanza because it helps me organize my thoughts. 1: (counting the first line as part ...

Hi there, Kyllorac. This made me actually facepalm. Oh, potatoes. And I thought it was a rather non-sequitur ending at first, but then I looked back and realized that you ...

Hi there, indie. I like that you focus on the first time your mother swore in front of you. It's an interesting moment, one of those that you should keep. ...