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Re: goose country
Oh gosh, Audy. I'm always so intimidated when I review one of your poems xD Welp, I'm here with the Ultramarines and the May Poetry Exchange to review your poem! ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Fish-hooks
Hi there, High Top! Here with the Ultramarines and the May Poetry Exchange to give your poem a totes fab review! ;) This is an interesting poem. I think you ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Kill your darlings
Hi there! All right, so prose poetry is not what I usually review, so if I say something that doesn't make sense for prose poetry, please ignore it. First, I'll ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Both Ways
Hey, Aley, babes
May 23, 2014 -
Re: "Perfect" Chemistry
Hi Fort! So I won't be able to give you a detailed review on the sciencey type things, like niteowl. I'm no science major. But I am an English major! ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Old September's Dewdrops-- a Nonet
Hi, Fort! I love the imagery you've got going on here. It's lovely. That being said, there are some things I'd like to address. While the stylistic usages of sentence ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: False Bliss
Aight, broski, you said be blunt. This isn't the worst thing I've ever read. Certainly not the best, though. Thing 1: there doesn't have to be punctuation on the end ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Genesis
Hi there! Wow, I really enjoyed this. Nice work. You certainly show and don't tell, and you keep me interested throughout. That being said, there are a few things I'd ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Peaceful destruction
Hi, Auxii! So I like a lot of the images and juxtapositions you've got going on here, but honestly, it's quite difficult to understand. First of all, I'm not a ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: The Final Hunt
Hi there! This is pretty good! You've gotten a like out of me! I do have a few things I'd like to address about the poem, however. The first thing ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Invisible
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. On the first read through, I was confused. You jumped from her needing someone to ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Sexism or an Overreaction?
Hello, Trudi! As a feminist, I found your article to be nice. I think that it still needs a little work, and I will provide suggestions that will make your ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: Rain on Glass
Hi there, niteowl! I actually quite liked this. Since they're lyrics, I feel like they have a license to be a bit cheesy. ^_^ So the first verse made me ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: For official purposes, these children do not exist
Hello, Deanie! Your imagery is lovely, and I love the titular line. Nice. I do have a few things I'd like to address. Not a morsel passed their lips, nor ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: A Johnlock Poem
Hello, AnimeGirl! So here's a disclaimer: I am not an expert at reviewing fanfiction. If I say something that doesn't go along with it, please feel free to disregard that ...
May 13, 2014
