Morrigan

Hello there, beans! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! While I haven't read the other parts of this story, I was still able to figure out ...

Hello, miley. Welcome to YWS! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, I found this almost unreadable. I understand that this is satire, but ...

Hi there, Skor! I like this, but it's always really difficult for me to review meta pieces like this. A poem that talks about the poem itself. It makes my ...

Hey there, Katya! I'm here to review for the poetry exchange. I feel like this poem doesn't really talk about the main issue in the poem. Which is only mentioned ...

Hello, LordGreenleaf! Ahhhh, this is lovely. I love how you stuck to a particular image throughout the poem and applied it to the abstract. Poetry is all about making connections, ...

Hello, Pinkie! You have some malware on your computer. It inserts links into your work. While they're not harmful to anyone else, you should take some time to see how ...

Hi there! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. As someone who has felt the way that ...

Hello, Dillbert. This is lovely. I really don't have much to say in the way of criticism. I like that you made the choice to have "scream" on its own ...

Hello, Ghoul! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I'll start by asking a few questions about the piece and trying to find an answer. What is ...

Hello, Cailey! Poetry should be a mix of concrete and abstract, a way to illustrate something abstract with concrete things to the reader. I love that you've used so many ...

Hi, purple! Ah, a relationship poem. I really like how the rhyme scheme adds to the overall cute feel of this (though some of your phrases point to this trying ...

Hey there, wtp! An interesting poem! I actually like the rhyme scheme you've got going here. I usually don't like rhyming poetry, but it seemed to me like his friends ...

Hi there, wisegirl22! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I like that this has a nice message. Your language usage isn't too bad either. That being ...

Hi strange. Okay, so this was supposed to be really funny, and it was quite amusing, but the end fell flat with me. I think that having an actual alien ...

Wow, really nice story concept! I like it! Your descriptions are pretty darn good. I cringed at Anne removing the wedding ring. *shudders* That being said, there are a few ...