Morrigan

Hello, nanya. Love is a very common subject in poetry. Some would say that art is only about one of two things: love and death. Somehow, all art connects to ...

Hello, Margo! First of all, your imagery is lovely. I love the way you put words together to make me think in new ways. That being said, it's missing something. ...

Hello, theironnovelist. I really enjoyed this because of the subject matter. I don't have OCD, and none of my friends have OCD, but some of them still say, "I'm so ...

Hello, AndrewRayne, and welcome to YWS! It's good to see new faces around. I really enjoy the sentiment behind this, a longing for someone you haven't even met. Simply the ...

I gave this a like earlier, and I'd like to explain why I liked it. This is honest, whether it actually happened to you or not. The emotion behind it ...

Hello there! The unknown and the divine are certainly interesting to ponder, aren't they? I appreciate some of your images in the middle, but I really like your questions at ...

Hi Blackwood! I'm here to rescue your chapter from the green room. I noticed that you have a lot of proofreading errors, and that Kyll took care of most of ...

Hello, SilloriaD. I'm Morrigan, here to review your poem. First of all, I've been in this place. Unrequited love stings. Like, really stings. And it stinks, too. That's why there ...

MEMORANDUM To: DrFeelGood From: Morrigan Date: 23 March 2015 Re: An Open Letter By Internal Organs Recommendations regarding changes to letter This memo explains several suggestions for change to the ...

Hello, Thriver. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I can't really tell where you wanted this to go. There's no realization, no direction, nothing except for ...

Hi, Rhia! As always, this is excellent. It gave me shivers, too, the quiet joy that turned to anger and desperation, bitterness at good luck dangled so close but out ...

Hello, monsters. I really like your rhyme scheme and your use of imagery in this poem. I'm surprised I like the rhyme scheme, but it's quite nice. That being said, ...

Hello, gottahaveFaith, I thought this was a very interesting and different take on depression and finding hope again. That being said, there are a few suggestions I'd like to present ...

Hello, inkwell. This is lovely. It's a love poem without being a love poem, without describing the person, or the narrator's feelings, just the facts of the relationship that create ...

Hi there, pompiepoo! I loved this, with all your lovely imagery and personification. Very nicely done. That being said, there are a few things I'd like to suggest that might ...