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Re: the luxury of lungs
Hello again, Magebird! Another cool poem with a strong motif. This one is definitely different than your nature poem; it lives in metaphor town, so you have more freedom with ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: nullify you
Hi bby it's good to see you. I find it hard to critique anything that you put out. Maybe it's your enchanting voice or your simple but sophisticated lyrics, but ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: Deleted
Hello JacobMoor! Your first free verse poem, huh? Let's take a look under the hood! I enjoy that this has a motif. You've definitely got a feel for poetic imagery. ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: alphabetical gaze
Hey there, whatchamacallit, Morri here to review your poem! This is a funky poem. I dig what you're trying to do here. It's an interesting comparison to make. The biggest ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: Portrait of a corpse
Hello IamI, I'm Morrigan, and I'm here to review your poem. To be honest, I'm not a huge fan of sonnets, but I think that the language here actually fits ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: wildflowers
Hellooooooo Magebird! Dropping by. I'm rusty, so if this review bites you, just get a tetanus shot. On first read, I really like this. It's simple, and its message is ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: ghost of me
Hi yellow, I'm here to tear your poem to shreds, as requested. First of all, I've been here. It's rough. I'm sorry you're going through something like this. Your feelings ...
Jun 15, 2020 -
Re: Gay
Hi Tuckster! Morri here for to review your piece. Yay! I love coming out stories! I'm not sure if this is a personal piece or written from a different perspective, ...
Jun 11, 2020 -
Re: Much Ado About Nothing (taking suggestions for a better title.)
Hi, I'm Morri, here to leave you a review. Hopefully you're taking suggestions for more than just the title! ;) This is an interesting story, and while you incorporate rhyme ...
Apr 30, 2020 -
Re: napo2020 #3
Hi Blue, I'm dropping in to review! First of all, I love the content and the pacing of this piece. It walks along the shore, just like quiet happiness. The ...
Apr 30, 2020 -
Re: Seaside Roller Coaster
Hi Necromancer! I'm Morrigan, here to review your poem. This gave me quite a chuckle! It's lighthearted, and it really brings back that time when my cousin hurled all over ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Chapter One
Hi Soulkana, I'm here to leave a review. I enjoy how you allow characters to have a moment. The small ones, like the book, and the tea. I feel like ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Shouting at the Rain
Hi there Alpaca! I saw that you wanted reviews on this poem in the Gryffindor forum. I agree with Elinor-- I really enjoy the meter that you created in this ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: The Weed Within
Hi there whatchamacallit, Morrigan here to review your poem, as requested in the Gryffindor forum! Man, it's been a long time since I've felt this way. Emotional poetry is such ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: When Leaves Fall As People Do
Howdy howdy! I'm here to review your piece. First of all, after reading through the other reviews, I want to say that I agree with Elinor's point that I want ...
Apr 26, 2020
