Morrigan

Hi there, Hermione! I really quite enjoyed reading this. You do a good job of creating a pause in time and showcasing it. That being said, it can be improved ...

Hello, Widders! It's been a while since I've reviewed one of your works. I really enjoyed this. It was very nice, and hey, you've introduced me to some new poetry! ...

Hello, theironnovelist! As always, imagery and emotion are the strong points in your poem. This poem, though, is lacking a little, I feel. It's bogged down. Here, let me get ...

Hello, Curiosity! You have some nice imagery in here. I enjoyed the inclusion of the concrete imagery (the mountain tops, the wood), but that being said, I have some suggestions ...

Hello, Lajnsuik! I liked this a lot. I can really feel the emotion you put into it when you wrote it. Your word choice is really nice. I like the ...

Hello, ClippedWings! I read in your description that you are not really looking for reviews. This confused me, as you can actually post your works without any points in the ...

Hello, Savvy! This is great! I love it! You take something simple and make me examine it in a new way (at this moment, I am eating cereal, believe it ...

Hello, Don. I think that this is an interesting concept, but I don't know if it's really doing it for me. The poem doesn't really do anything new with the ...

Hello there, Rascalover. To be honest, I think this could have done without the incorporation of that famous six word story. While it works, I suppose, it makes the man ...

Hello, haven235. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. It might just be my exhausted brain talking, but I have no idea what happened in these lyrics. ...

Hi there again, WindSailor. To be honest, I'm not really sure how to review this. I used to sing songs like this at my church all the time. Worship songs ...

Hello, WindSailor. I actually quite liked this. While love is a subject that comes up in poetry and lyrics abundantly too often, I think you might have actually brought something ...

Hello, you two authors! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. As straightforward as the language is, I really have no idea what this is about. The ...

I'm rolling. This is hilarious. Hello, you clever cleverclogs! I'm here to review! First of all, congratulations on writing an actual shakesperean sonnet. It's so frustrating to find people claiming ...

Hello again, QueenofWords! Ooh, a palindrome! These are lovely when done well, and I think you've hit the mark. I've even "liked" it, and I don't "like" things often. I ...