Morrigan

Hello. I totally understand the feeling of this poem. As in, I like the way you expressed the emotions in this poem. I don't think that it should be classified ...

Hello. Today I'm going to talk to you about line breaks. You always* want to end a line on a strong word. A strong word is a verb or a ...

Hey there, incohesivescribbles! I really enjoyed reading this poem. I usually do not enjoy rhyming poetry, but you managed to stay away from forced rhymes and kept the focus on ...

Hello. Hey, this is a pretty all right first attempt at poetry. You have the characteristics of it growing. I can still tell that this is a first attempt. While ...

Hello. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. A lot of your rhymes are forced. As in, they bend the rules of grammar and comprehension for the ...

Hello. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I feel like this is trying too hard. It's not really pleasant to read, just kind of cumbersome with ...

Hello! First of all, congratulations on writing this. I can tell it took a lot of time and thought, and probably rehearsal before you recorded this. I really enjoy the ...

Hello there. Since you're all about those reviews, and you have none, I figured I'd drop by. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. While I'm able ...

Hi there, UriahElroy! I liked this a while ago, and since it's still in the green room, I figured I'd drop by and tell you why I liked it. I ...

Hello, znale1! I'm here to leave you a helpful review! I understand how this is supposed to start out as one thing and then turn into another, but I think ...

Ahoy, Cap'n! Just to let you know about formatting, if you want a stanza break, you can just press enter without hitting shift. The squiggles are a tad distracting. There ...

Hello, TheShauzer! While I appreciate some of your imagery, I feel like there are a few things in this poem that could be better executed. First of all, you didn't ...

Hello, Annaclare. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. The reason I clicked on this poem today is not because I was attracted by the title, but ...

Hello, Dreamwalker! I'm here to leave what I hope is going to be a helpful review! First of all, I've already read it through five times, and the feeling it ...

Hello, plathonstone, and welcome to YWS. I can understand what you're feeling through this poem, though I do have some things to say about it. First, though, I will critique ...