Morrigan

Jules! While I haven't read the other chapters, this is well written enough that I'm able to understand what's going on. Overall, I really liked this. It's lighthearted and also ...

Hello! I'm here representing team Potter on review day! I think, while this is an interesting concept, the execution needs work. Meandbooks is right about potentially offending three different religio

Heyo, Savvy, To be honest, I really like this. I'm kind of inspired by it, actually. It's lovely and the meaning is clear but not explicitly stated. That being said, ...

Hello. InfiniteRectangles so kindly took their own bias out of their review, but since you allowed your bias to flourish in this "essay," I will not remove mine. First of ...

Hello, Elysium. Personally, I think that this is about the writing level of a 5 or 6 year old. Give 8 year olds more credit! I also don't think that ...

Hello, DreamingForever. While I understand the concept in this poem, I think it needs a bit of work. You decide to tackle two very broad concepts in only three lines. ...

I've been meaning to review this since the first time I read it, which was the day you posted this. Alas, real life has been trampling me, and I'm only ...

Hello, poopsie. There are parts of this where I can taste the sun rays falling near my mouth. Glimpses of pure joy. The buttermilk sky got me. And teal n ...

Hi Lightsong! Since there are three costs, I'll talk about each of them in turn. But first, let me just say that I enjoyed the precise imagery that you brought ...

Hello, Adri. I'm here to review your poem. I feel like I'm fairly up to date on current events and what you're referencing in this poem. I appreciate how timely ...

Hello, Yams! I like that you use imagery to drive this poem. You give readers a nice visual of what's literally happening in the poem, and also metaphorical images to ...

Hello~ Congratulations on making me think for half an hour before I wrote this review. It wasn't the poem that made me think, though-- it was your comment below. I'm ...

Dang, girl. I remember saying to you that you needed to focus more on your subject from the beginning. Well, you've done that, and you've created something really nice and ...

Hello, summerinthecity. I'm here to review your poem. I can understand the situations that you give here. I understand that there is some kind of social commentary here. I am ...

Hi, cleverclogs! I think the best thing about this piece is that your raw emotion shows through. This seems like it was a very cathartic piece to write. That being ...