Young Writers Society

Hey friend, Morri here for a review! Congrats on making it to the front page. I'm an old lady, just visiting some old internet haunts; since your poem is on ...

Hey Vil, Morri here to review your piece. The first thing I noticed about this piece is that it's extremely biased. Reading through RavenLord's review, I think that they could ...

Hello ChrisDixon! Morrigan here to review your poem! I see from the comment you left on your piece that you were having trouble with spacing on YWS. If you hold ...

Hi LordMomo! I'm here to leave you a review. First of all, I agree with everything that Efuellia said, especially about punctuation and stanzas. I can relate to this poem. ...

Hey again Artie! So in the previous part I reviewed, I mentioned how I loved the fast pacing. Here, it's not working as well. Slow down a little and let ...

Helloooooooo Artie! I'm rescuing this work from the Green Room for ya! All right, so I'm actually really excited to read this because I didn't ever see this in the ...

Helloooooo! I'm here to rescue your work from the Green Room! As I haven't read the rest of this story, I won't comment on plot too much, but I'll address ...

Hello silented1! It's been a while since you've posted anything here. I like your style. It's straightforward and doesn't think too highly of itself. I like the motif of your ...

Hello Anamel! That's a whale of a poem you've got there! First of all, I can tell you read. You have some great imagery, and your thoughts are organized and ...

Hey there, LadyGemstone! I see that you posted a bunch of poems, so I figured I'd look at a few that were still in the Green Room! This poem has ...

Hey there, LadyGemstone. Morri here to review your poem. The first thing I noticed about this piece is the atmospheric imagery. You start with an image that frames the piece ...

Hey Cow, how's it going? I like that you feel confident enough in this poem to like it yourself. This seems like a very personal work, but I will review ...

Hey there, Em16, Morrigan here to review your poem. First of all, I like the imagery you use in this poem a lot. Your use of audio imagery is very ...

Hello! Morrigan here to review your piece! First of all, this seems very personal, so it will be difficult for me to review. Since you posted this as a literary ...

Hey there, Alpaca! I'm dropping by to review your poem. This is the part where I simultaneously complement the way you used visuals to convey the feeling in your poem, ...