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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Make Me

    Hey friend, Morri here for a review! Congrats on making it to the front page. I'm an old lady, just visiting some old internet haunts; since your poem is on ...

    Jun 10, 2022

  • Article / Essay » Politics, Other
    Re: YWS Polling Survey Results

    Hey Vil, Morri here to review your piece. The first thing I noticed about this piece is that it's extremely biased. Reading through RavenLord's review, I think that they could ...

    Oct 21, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, Supernatural
    Re: Youth of Life

    Hello ChrisDixon! Morrigan here to review your poem! I see from the comment you left on your piece that you were having trouble with spacing on YWS. If you hold ...

    Oct 16, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: car ride

    Hi LordMomo! I'm here to leave you a review. First of all, I agree with everything that Efuellia said, especially about punctuation and stanzas. I can relate to this poem. ...

    Oct 6, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative
    Re: Bird Heart Desires - V. 01 - C. 01.2

    Hey again Artie! So in the previous part I reviewed, I mentioned how I loved the fast pacing. Here, it's not working as well. Slow down a little and let ...

    Aug 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative
    Re: Bird Heart Desires - V. 01 - C. 01.1

    Helloooooooo Artie! I'm rescuing this work from the Green Room for ya! All right, so I'm actually really excited to read this because I didn't ever see this in the ...

    Aug 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: How Do You Plead: 12.2

    Helloooooo! I'm here to rescue your work from the Green Room! As I haven't read the rest of this story, I won't comment on plot too much, but I'll address ...

    Aug 30, 2020

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Too short for shade

    Hello silented1! It's been a while since you've posted anything here. I like your style. It's straightforward and doesn't think too highly of itself. I like the motif of your ...

    Aug 28, 2020

  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic
    Re: language of flowers

    Hello Anamel! That's a whale of a poem you've got there! First of all, I can tell you read. You have some great imagery, and your thoughts are organized and ...

    Aug 28, 2020

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Health
    Re: Oh Mirror of Mine

    Hey there, LadyGemstone! I see that you posted a bunch of poems, so I figured I'd look at a few that were still in the Green Room! This poem has ...

    Aug 28, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health
    Re: Swallowing Glass

    Hey there, LadyGemstone. Morri here to review your poem. The first thing I noticed about this piece is the atmospheric imagery. You start with an image that frames the piece ...

    Aug 28, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: I Feel Guilty

    Hey Cow, how's it going? I like that you feel confident enough in this poem to like it yourself. This seems like a very personal work, but I will review ...

    Aug 14, 2020

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Love Will Keep Us Alive

    Hey there, Em16, Morrigan here to review your poem. First of all, I like the imagery you use in this poem a lot. Your use of audio imagery is very ...

    Aug 9, 2020

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Forgiveness

    Hello! Morrigan here to review your piece! First of all, this seems very personal, so it will be difficult for me to review. Since you posted this as a literary ...

    Aug 9, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: The Runner

    Hey there, Alpaca! I'm dropping by to review your poem. This is the part where I simultaneously complement the way you used visuals to convey the feeling in your poem, ...

    Aug 9, 2020

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