MoonLitTragedy

Thank you for your review. This poem was just something I wrote for one of the five minute free writes my teacher does just to put a participation grade in ...

Thank you for your review, I'll keep those suggestions in mind!

I really like this. The mood of the poem is set very well by the words you use, and the imagery is very good. I love you you ended it, ...

Ah, sorry that's confusing. I meant that nothing is capitalized, including "I." If you wanted, you could capitalize the beginnings of sentences or stanzas, and add periods, commas, etc., but ...

Thank you for the review, it is helpful. When I get caught up on and a break from my school work, I'm going to go back and edit that line, ...

This was beautiful, especially with the way Hermione reacted after Draco was pulled out of the water. I also like how Lucius actually helped Draco instead of dragging him into ...

This was absolutely amazing! I think you should write more in this area (Dramione fanfics – I ship it so hard), because you definitely did a great job. I love ...

I have a couple questions. I know what NaNoWriMo is, but how do I participate? Is there a place where guidelines are posted? And what if you don't finish the ...

I really like this, but some of the places where you started a new line didn’t really make sense to me. Something I liked was how you arranged the faded ...

I love how you ended the first paragraph. Many of your wordings are very intriguing, and I love the entire idea of this story. I also like how you ended ...

Thank you! I will attempt to re word that sentence, and check over a few more. I also will work on changing the title.