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Re: Galaxy Boy
Well I wrote few stories so I review few stories now and again... You looked him in the eye and saw solar flares, and you couldn't help but notice that ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: The Dust of Time
Wow, this is truly beautiful and I don't give this compliment alot, if ever. I am so glad that you didn't try to rhyme with this one because it would ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Fear/Blue Eyes
Paralysing and all-consuming, It burns like a wild fire, Till it leaves you like a walking corpse, Afraid of footsteps or the closing of a door. The problem with excessive ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: i.a.e.y.o.u.
Sorry if this seems close minded of me as I actually do see the value in the haiku. This in particular has no image but it has a story (i.e. ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: A Joy or a Pest, Who's Your Roommate?
Someone who has been stuck in a state of naiveté, much like my former self, could simply say, “roommates are roommates, no big deal.” However, with a great deal of ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Blank
Well I am a computer science major so... Technology is amazing. From robots that can make cars to drones that can deliver your mail, technology is advancing, and it’s everywhere. ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Is Religion Evil?
Richard Dawkins is not the atheist community. Many people of the atheist community downright think he is a bad name to the atheist. Why would you stereotype a whole group ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: I am not a toy
I am not a toy," I said. I stared you in the eyes. I filled you with dread. I was oblivious to your cries. There is absolutely nothing here besides ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: Fear/Blue Eyes
Thanks for posting on my official 'review for food' thread. I will review your first poem and come back later to review the second so that I have a fresh ...
Mar 10, 2014 -
Re: The Balloon
I remember reading something similar at the workshop, this was a nice 'spur of the moment poem' indeed. I can't say I get impressed with these types of poems that ...
Mar 9, 2014 -
Re: Too Many of Us
I don't really agree with the idea of this poem. I am a perfectionist but I know that I am no where even close to perfect. It's a personality trait ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Thrax
I don't have much time for this review so sorry if its seems rushed. I let the cold come. I embraced the smallest snowflakes as they touched the tips of ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: Always Remember...
Is this a list of things you should do or is it a poem? It's like you gathered a bunch of cliches running around facebook and slopped them down calling ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Hate cannot conquer love.
She screams, she bleeds, she cries, she pleads. She begs, she lies, she's cold, she died. I stand, I cry, I scream, I deny. I hide, I beg, she can't ...
Mar 3, 2014 -
Re: Mom
An organized woman with grace and humor Or a controlling creature with claws like a steak knife The two sides of my good friend With an itch like a tumor ...
Mar 3, 2014
