Monsters

Hey Persy, I seen you posted something and I had to come see. :) I like it alot but I just didn't find this work to be subpar with your ...

So if the test is asking questions about hooks law, light refraction and the lord of the flies then it is really only attempting to test your knowledge. So this ...

Your heartbeats echo through test tubes and beakers. You told me that salt complexes don’t cry, so I've have streams of HCL running down instead. Well.. you got the obvious: ...

Hey sparky, it's monsters. So I was reading this and I find myself cutting words and phrases just to get to the meat of the whole poem. The problem isn't ...

true love is never ambivalent, though it can be a joke between best friends and also a spiritual anchor between los angeles and westport; and if you really look into ...

Sorry, but if your going to use this method then you need to write it like a slam and not like regular written poetry. The line about there being no ...

Your opening is hardly interesting and quite honestly, hard to take it. You go from making a questionable fact to another questionable fact without explaining the research or how this ...

well then, Vereen. You always amaze me somehow, this is great but not perfect. The formatting is a bit distracting and counter-intuitive; how is one to know what you mean ...

hello, it's monsters. First of all; things like drops, pitter patter, clocks ticking away the time you have left, ect. make me not want to read the poem. It feels ...

Ocean soul, open your beautiful eyes and transcend beyond your mind’s lies - I found the definition of beauty when I met the ocean and I saw night’s poetic collision ...

Okay so some of this 'poem' dragged on a bit and didn't flow. It felt like sentences just ran on without a stop and that's bad because poetry is about ...

The vodka that turns me into a trembling wreck. - The cigarettes that make me long for home. - You know it’s too late when you steal that bottle, Take ...

Hey Veeren, it's monsters. but only when it was convenient for you you'd shut me out and demand more from me the later it got Vereen, I want to just ...

Sorry if this gets rough at times - The whole rhyme thing and the seriousness of the topic is not working for you; if your character was truly on the ...

My poems are blurring together, Eventually they just sound the same. Same meaning, same rhythm, same rhymes. My inspiration is lost. - My heart is torn and ragged, From the ...