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Re: Kiss Me, before I Die
Hey - I'm Mo, and I'm gonna give a quick review - 'kay? :D Okay - so I'm liking the theme of this piece - the Nazi feel is very ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: The Spirit Boy: Chapter One
Hey there, here to review :) So, I won't nit-pick, as it seems that everyone else has done a pretty good job of that - but I will give you ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Third Avenue
Woah, this is really very cool. At first I really thought it was odd. It seemed to make absolutely no sense - well, at least not in my head anyway. ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Kiss Of Death: Prologue
Hey there, here to review. I wont nit-pick and such as it seems everyone else has done a pretty good job and such. I liked this piece, it's really intriguing ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Land of Bliss
Hey there! :) I'm Mo, and I'll be giving you a little review. :D Before I begin, I'd just like to say that I really liked the plot and storyline ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Dear Someone.
Hey there! :) 'tis mo. Here to review. :D I thought this was really good. I really liked the whole idea of the piece. And I love the emotion you ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: The sun stranger
"come inside" My mother said. She placed her palm upon my head. I grudgingly move inside our house. Where it is the dead of night, when the sun is out. ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: The Beat Road
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! :D Now to review. :D Honestly, this poem doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. I like your wording in that in certain ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Magic
I like this piece, it's really cute, short and sweet. The one thing that I think you could fix is the length of the last line in the first stanza ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: 50 Years Later ~ Part One ~ Prologue
I personally, love this. :D But, I should probably give a proper critique, so here goes. :) First off, you've said simply: "It's fifty years later". Now, I'm guessing that ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Love
Hello. Guess what? you get my 99th review. :) :elephant:
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Jump *edited*
Hi there, Mo here to review! Sorry I've taken so long to get to this, I haven't been checking my WRFF thread often enough! Anyway, here goes: I liked this, ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games
I absolutely LOVE the Hunger Games. :D I'm so teem Peeta, he's so sweet, and- anyway, I probably don't need to describe him to you! You've already formed your opinion! ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
This is awesome! Great job - I know a lot of people think parodies are easy, but they're really not, and this is really good! Good Luck, and keep parody-ing! ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: In Retrospect: Evil Knows No Limit
Hey, It's Mo, here to review! Sorry I'm so late to reply to your WRFF thread post! Evil knows no limit. They will stop at nothing to cling on to ...
Mar 15, 2010
