MisunderstoodDreamer

Wow! You're an amazing writer! One thing I didn't love was the first stanza of re first poem, though I know there's probably not much that rhymes with petals. Other ...

Night comes, bringing a full moon . I think this should be a comma Shining down like a brilliant cone of white light , like streaks of soothing beauty. Flowers ...

I think this poem is really good! Sorry, I know this isn't much of a review and you were probably hoping for more. I'm not the best at this quite ...

This is a really good poem. I think it's really good how other people can relate to it. The only other thing I have to say about it is that ...

I thought the meaning to this was really great, but it felt a little broken. Some of the lines were really short, others were longer. I think you should choose ...

This is really good! The only thing I didn't like about it was how long the lines were. I think if you broke them up a bit more, it could ...

I really like this poem. It's well written, creative, and really expressive! I know this isn't much of a review, but I don't really have much to say about this ...

I love this poem, especially the way you organized it: what they did, what you don't want to do, what you do want to do, again the things they did, ...

I thought the poem was a bit broken and sketchy. It felt like the line breaks weren't in the right spots. Try to make it flow a little more, unless ...

This is amazing! It makes me think back to all those times. It really flowed as I read it; nothing seemed out the ordinary. Everything fit in! I think (and ...

You're amazingly descriptive! I love winter, and I think this poem let's look at it from a new view. You show all the things that happen in winter. The only ...

This is really good! I love spring and you did an amazing job describing it. The only thing I would add is some senses. You talked about the birds and ...