Misty

Wow, I really liked this! And I could relate to what you're saying. some crit: classrooms are too small the chalkdust always invades my nostrils *invades...hmmm, good word. I hate ...

I liked this. You used sight and sound and taste and all of those things in here. I didn't quite understand it though, but I love the rain and I ...

oh wow. That was the most crazy-nasty story I've ever read, but it made me want to keep on reading from the point I found out he was her father ...

all right, i've never critted your stuff and I have more time than I thought I would since Brad only posted one new poem. the refreshing taste of nicotine smoke ...

oh, honestly, you wouldn't really want to fall into an abyss of nothingness or whatever and watch your bones splinter. Okay, let me TRY to comment on this. i--i do ...

Aw.....this is so...sad and everything. Alright, ACTUAL CRITIQUE a while ago i sat in my room and stared at pictures pasted to blue construction paper and blah blah blah - ...

*shock* beautiful....*wipes tear* do not respond to an e-mail, long after the fact, and confess your unadulterated love for pasta and wild parties and crazy little boys, just don’t. okay? ...

:D Sam this is adorable! It was really funny and sweet. I liked it alot! The repitition of, "yeah, like that," was pretty sweet. "but now you have the problem ...

I like it. :( but I have no critique, because there's nothing to critique. I have a question: Sure.I’ll ask. I reply, quickly covering the corner of the slate with ...

kk. I'll see if I can help. :wink: :D Have you ever seen a person die? Been there as they made their last breaths, as the so-called light faded from ...

I thought this poem was really cute, and I like it. Honestly, the rhyming did seem forced, but all of my poem's from when I was fourteen were like that ...

I don't quite understand how a word can caress you, so in a way this poem seemed almost suicidal to me. But I agree with scissorquiz who said that it ...

yeah, I agree too. It, uh, it was sort of like...whoa, what? And it sort of rhymed but then again it didn't rhyme. I'll see if I can help: Your ...

tiny font, "burn the rich," that's funny. okay...lemme think I like this because it has a really nice flow, and it gives me an awesome picture. The one line i ...

yeah, uh....lemme think. I'm bad at critting poems! :( But, the words that didn't flow (for me) were: Frankenstein, the part about him wrapping himself in cotton wool..and... Well I ...