MissRockers

I enjoyed this poem immensely. I was a little concerned that hell and heaven would not be mentioned, but when they were, I was overjoyed! :D I believe an awkward ...

Hmm, I agree with the reviews before me, it was very interesting. It was almost strange in a way! I'm not sure if I liked it or if I didn't. ...

Hey, thanks everyone for the good tips!! Could anyone be so kind as to just tell me exactly which parts in particular the flow doesn't work, or where it's choppy. ...

I see that you've fixed the capitalization! :) Looks much better.

Haha, lele253isme pretty much summed up what I was thinking too...but, much shorter. :) It's just a sea of facts.

Thanks. I just added another stanza. I completely agreed with your suggestion.

Oh wow. I love this!!!! What Wondrous Love is This....(reminds me of that song.) You pretty much explained my quote from C.S. Lewis...on my signature below. Jesus shouts to us ...

Great job with this poem. Again, this is something that everyone can relate to. The flow was good, and overall, everything sounded wonderful. Keep writing beautiful poetry.

Ah, yeah, punctuation does make things very different. I'm glad you can make that choice by yourself though. That's great. I'm so proud of you for being strong. Just keep ...

I just wanted to say that I love this poem! The last two lines for me were the best! :)

Another thing I wanted to mention. You chose a great title for this. It grabbed LOTS of people's attention. You named it perfectly!

I truly thank all of you guys. God is all of the love and support I will ever need. And, so are you guys!! It's what keeps me goin'!

Thanks so much! What I've realized throughout this year especially is that God will be there for everyone, no matter WHAT. We just have to be reminded of that all ...

K, thanks for your tips! Haha, yep, I agree busy people definitely get old!

This is really good!! i enjoyed it a lot. I wouldn't say I enjoyed it, but it made me think very hard, and i connected with it. I'm sure one ...