MissGangamash

This wasn't what I was expecting from the title. I was expecting something from a victims POV, but nevertheless, it was an enjoyable read. There were a few spelling errors ...

I'll point out things as I'm reading then give you a review at the end because it's easier.. - 'The doctors would have called it Middle Child Syndrome. The middle ...

First off, love your profile pic! Okay, now onto your work. You did stick to the tune of the song quite well but there were a few extra beats in ...

Congratulations on all of the likes! I've never seen so many! And it makes me so happy that this piece has them because it means that all those people support ...

This is a good piece but the punctuation makes it rather difficult to read. I can't really pin-point what's wrong because it's all over the place but basically, you need ...

Love. Love. Love this! Omg. It's amazing! Nothing better than reading/watching something about a good psycho XD The narrator in this had me thinking about Patrick Bateman, especially the bit ...

As not that much happened here, I've not really got much to say. I think Dannel should be more surprised about Frantz wanting to help him escape. The whole chapter ...

OOoooh so they guy paid Damien to antagonise her? What's this dude's deal?! And what does he mean by her screaming the loudest.... very intriguing! I really hope he doesn't ...

First off, great cliff-hanger :D I like the introduction to the new characters (or were they mentioned in chapter 1 & 2? It was so long ago that I read ...

I spotted a few errors: 'Jimmy glanced at his watch as the bell rang. His must be a minute too fast.' - either change 'his' to 'it', or 'his watch'. ...

Omg I want to punch Paul in the face so hard. It seems like Amy can't do anything right yet he's so concerned about her safety? The dude needs a ...

Another great chapter, I loved the dream sequence, very chilling - especially the paint running and looking like blood. But I'd suggest maybe leaving out her surprise that she could ...

Only just realised there was more of this because I wasn't updated so I had to skim read the last chapter to remember what was going on. I like the ...

I am thoroughly enjoying reading this, your writing style is very unique and I can't wait to read more. After skimming over your other reviews, they seemed to have pointed ...

This is an interesting start, but rather confusing. I like how you have dropped the reader into the action straight away but as I continued to read, things got a ...