Mira

Hiyas, Jynx! Sorry this took so long. I know I promised this last week, but I've been a bit busy. Still, I hope you'll forgive me! D: But on to ...

Hi! I'm Mira! Nitpicks: Oagle looked at the elf smiling, "S oon they will be too close for your arrows. This sentence took me a moment to understand, but I ...

Hiyas, Dream! ^-^ Hope you don't mind if I get straight to the review. ;) Nitpicks: Natasha?" she said, alarmed by her hysterical tone. "What's wrong?" I'd add "friend's" after ...

Hiyas! ^-^ I'm Mira and I definitely loved this. However, I do have a few nitpicks. ;) I dusted off the last tea cup and sighed as I gazed longingly ...

I laughed so much when I read this. It was very terrible! Anyway, I agree with everyone else and I think you'll do a great job for the contest. Lily, ...

Kat, your poem was amazing. It was as if I was there, sitting outside on the grass. :) Overall, perfectly wonderful! :) It flowed very well and had wonderful use ...

Hiyas, Taytay! :) Welcome to YWS. This story has a wonderful idea behind it, something that just catches my attention. However, do have a few nitpicks. Wow, I thought, this ...

So, TeamJake, this was amazing! I really loved it. :) However, I do have a few nitpicks. Right outside the window they’d just finished scrambling through there was a booming ...

Shina! This was really good! :) However, I do have just a few nitpicks. I hope you don't mind. They felt like crashing waves against our bodies. I'm just not ...

Ooh. This was very interesting. :) I can tell this is going to be something I'll want to keep up with. However, I do have a few nitpicks. It stretched ...

Hiyas Ashli! I'm Mira and I'm here to critique for you! *points* Hope that's okay. :) This was very interesting, something I'm sure I would enjoy if it was put ...

Hiyas, Helpful McHelpfulpants! (love your name, by the way) I'd have to say, this story was absolutely wonderful. You have a brilliant way of writing and I was just completely ...

Hiyas, Chaos! I hope you don't mind if I critique your story. :) Nitpicks: “It’s over; it’s finally over man ...” I spoke out to the group of my friends ...

Hiyas! I'm Mira! Welcome to YWS. :) Before I go on, however, I'd like to bring up one of the rules on the site: the 2:1 ratio! This just says ...

Hi, Shella! :) Before I begin, thanks for telling me about the revised edition of your lovely prologue! I was really happy to get to read it! Okay, now, on ...