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Hello, I’m Milesperhour, here to review your wonderful chapter this Viral Review Day! Ok first of all, this story really starts out strong with some GREAT description, i love literally ...

Hello! Milesperhour here to review your work! I find this very relatable lol. I agree with everything Tuesday said about this being a very moving piece with excellent imagery. I ...

Hello! I'm Milesperhour, here to review your excellent story!! :D First of all, this story has a very cozy vibe, and I could immediately envision the setting within a few ...

Hello! I’m Milesperhour, here to review your lovely short story! This is really beautifully written, it uses really great descriptive language, and I really get a sense of the emotions ...

Hello chem :D I’m here to review your wonderful essay! As a fellow agnostic, I found this topic very interesting right off the bat! The idea of fate definitely brings ...

Hello, I’m Milesperhour, here to review your lovely story! I enjoyed reading this very much, and I really hope you continue this because there are so many potentially funny things ...

Hello! I am back to review the next chapter of your wonderful story!! It continues to be very intriguing, and I’m very interested in this new character Seth Adams, as ...

Hello! I am here to review your lovely short story! Right of the bat, great descriptive language, one definitely gets a clear picture of this senseless, bloody war, also lots ...

Ok I read the description and knew I HAD to review this! This is an excellent introduction- the historical context is well integrated (not to mention its prohibition/great depression which ...

This is an amazing first chapter! There is a very clear sense of place, and the descriptive language is very effective for setting the scene. The dialogue is natural and ...

This is an excellent piece! The character has a very clear sense of voice (is that the right term?) and its believable that he is a sixth grader- there are ...

This is an excellent start, and I’m very curious to see where this story is headed! One thing I think is very strong in these first few chapters is the ...

This is very good! I like the metaphors you use, especially the first one you use to describe Lotus, and the connection the two fairies feel because of both of ...