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Hey!!! Mph here, reviewing your poem on behalf of Team Bees!! I will start with the things that were great about this poem, and there are a lot of things! ...

Hi, mph here, reviewing on behalf of Team Bees!! This poem is short but sweet, and I think despite its length there is a good bit to unpack! The first ...

Hello! Mph here, on behalf of Team Bees, excited to review your very cool poem! Idk why but when I read this I kind of wanted to analyze it and ...

Hiiiii! Mph from Team Bees here! I am once again here to review one of your lovely poems!!! Ok so starting with the title, I looked it up and apparently ...

Hello, I’m mph, here to review your work on behalf of Team Bees! Ok so starting with things that I like- I really like the descriptions you chose- crows, carnations, ...

Hello! Mph here, on behalf of Team Bees! Wow…. this is a great poem. During my first read-through I was immediately impressed by the use of language. This poem really ...

Hello!!!!! Milesperhour here, to review another one of your poems!!! (yeah I'm reviewing two in an hour, I have too much time on my hands lol) First of all, the ...

Hello! Milesperhour here, to review your lovely poem! First of all, I love the descriptive language you use here, it really captures the essence of daydreaming! All the different imaginary ...

Hello! Milesperhour here, to review your very nice poem!! First of all, what stood out to me about this poem that it manages to balance a whole bunch of themes ...

Hello! Milesperhour here, to write yet another review of your amazing novel! First of all, I can't believe Emery's parents were THAT happy about him staying up late to go ...

Hello Hop! Mph here, back to review another of your very-cool-not-cute poems! Every one of your poems is better than the last! I really like how, at first, you use ...

Hello, Milesperhour here.... again... for another review of your lovely novel-in-progress!!!! Wow, you are writing these fast, I can barely keep up lol. I really like the way you write ...

Hi Hop! Milesperhour here, to review your very-cool-not-cute-at-all poem! Ok, in all seriousness, this is amazing! I like how you took a children's rhyme and flipped it on its head, ...

Hello!!! I'm Milesperhour, here to review this fascinating poem! First of all, I love how you use very specific and unusual details to describe both the speaker and their love. ...

Hello! I'm Milesperhour (again), here to review your amazing second chapter!!! While the first chapter focused on establishing the basic plot, I feel like this one really focuses on character ...