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Re: Nostalgia
Hello!!!!! Milesperhour here, to review another one of your poems!!! (yeah I'm reviewing two in an hour, I have too much time on my hands lol) First of all, the ...
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Re: Daydreams
Hello! Milesperhour here, to review your lovely poem! First of all, I love the descriptive language you use here, it really captures the essence of daydreaming! All the different imaginary ...
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Re: prison
Hello! Milesperhour here, to review your very nice poem!! First of all, what stood out to me about this poem that it manages to balance a whole bunch of themes ...
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Re: Seul: The Broken Symphony/Episode 4
Hello! Milesperhour here, to write yet another review of your amazing novel! First of all, I can't believe Emery's parents were THAT happy about him staying up late to go ...
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Re: The World is Grey
Hello Hop! Mph here, back to review another of your very-cool-not-cute poems! Every one of your poems is better than the last! I really like how, at first, you use ...
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Re: Seul: The Broken Symphony/Episode 3
Hello, Milesperhour here.... again... for another review of your lovely novel-in-progress!!!! Wow, you are writing these fast, I can barely keep up lol. I really like the way you write ...
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Re: Fuzzy Wuzzy
Hi Hop! Milesperhour here, to review your very-cool-not-cute-at-all poem! Ok, in all seriousness, this is amazing! I like how you took a children's rhyme and flipped it on its head, ...
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Re: we got married and you know me so well
Hello!!! I'm Milesperhour, here to review this fascinating poem! First of all, I love how you use very specific and unusual details to describe both the speaker and their love. ...
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Re: Seul: The Broken Symphony/Episode 2
Hello! I'm Milesperhour (again), here to review your amazing second chapter!!! While the first chapter focused on establishing the basic plot, I feel like this one really focuses on character ...
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Re: Salt & Pepper
Hello!! I'm Milesperhour, here to review this very powerful work! I'm going to talk a lot about my own interpretation of the poem, apologies if it's way off lol. I ...
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Re: Dance
Hello! I'm Milesperhour, here to review your amazing poetry! I love this poem, it definitely succeeds at creating its intended effect, the metaphor works very well. This is definitely a ...
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Re: Gazing In a Sea Of Silver Stars
Hello! I'm Milesperhour, here to review your lovely story! I'll be typing this while I read so apologies if it sounds a bit rambly. First of all, this story uses ...
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Re: The Soft Marshmallow
Hello!! I'm Milesperhour, here to review this very pretty poem! This is so sweet, honestly I love everything about this. It reads kind of like a song with how perfect ...
Sep 3, 2025 -
Re: I don't understand.
Hi, it's me, Miles, here to review this incredible poem! I usually don't review poetry (since I'm really bad at it lol), but this is really great so I decided ...
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Re: Seul: The Broken Symphony/ Episode 1
Hello! I'm Milesperhour, here to review your lovely episode! I tend to review while I read, so apologies if this seems a bit rambly. First of all, I like how ...
Sep 3, 2025
